1. Opening / Introducing the Purpose
Instead of always writing “With due respect, I want to say…”, you can use:
Formal & simple
With due respect, I would like to state that…
Respectfully, I wish to bring to your kind notice that…
I would like to draw your kind attention to the fact that…
I am writing this application to request…
I wish to inform you that…
I would like to bring to your notice that…
I humbly wish to state that…
I would like to submit that…
I am writing to seek your permission for…
I am writing this application regarding…
Through this application, I wish to request…
I would like to place before you my request for…
Traditional school-exam style
With due respect, I beg to state that…
Most respectfully, I beg to say that…
I respectfully submit that…
With great respect, I would like to state that…
Teaching tip: Tell students that “I beg to state” is grammatically acceptable in traditional formal applications, but “I would like to state/submit…” sounds more natural in modern formal English.
2. Lines for Explaining the Problem/Reason
Students often repeat “The reason is that…”. Give them alternatives:
The reason for my request is that…
I am unable to… because…
Unfortunately, I am unable to…
Due to …, I will not be able to…
As I am suffering from…, I am unable to…
Owing to…, I am unable to…
Because of the above-mentioned reason,…
In view of the circumstances,…
Considering the situation,…
I am facing difficulty in…
I have been unable to…
I would be grateful if you could consider my situation.
Example
Instead of:
The reason is that I am ill.
Students can write:
Due to my illness, I am unable to attend school.
or
As I am unwell, I will not be able to attend school.
or
Owing to health-related reasons, I am unable to attend school.
3. Requesting Something
This is probably the most useful section for applications.
Simple
I request you to kindly…
I request you to please…
I kindly request you to…
I would request you to…
I would like to request you to…
I wish to request you to…
More formal
I respectfully request you to…
I humbly request you to…
I sincerely request you to…
I would be grateful if you could…
I would greatly appreciate it if you could…
I kindly seek your permission to…
I seek your kind permission to…
I would like to seek your approval for…
I request your kind consideration regarding…
Example: Leave
Instead of:
I request you to grant me leave.
They can write:
I kindly request you to grant me leave.
I respectfully request you to allow me to remain absent.
I would be grateful if you could grant me leave for two days.
I seek your kind permission to remain absent from school for two days.
4. “Therefore” Alternatives
You should know that therefore isn't the only connecting word.
Instead of:
I, therefore, request you…
They can use:
Hence, I request you to…
Therefore, I kindly request you to…
Thus, I request you to…
For this reason, I request you to…
In view of the above, I request you to…
Considering the circumstances, I request you to…
Keeping the above-mentioned situation in mind, I request you to…
I would, therefore, request you to…
I would thus request you to…
Under these circumstances, I request you to…
A particularly good formal expression:
In view of the above circumstances, I kindly request you to consider my application.
5. Concluding / Hopeful Lines
This is where students usually write only:
I shall be highly obliged to you.
Teach them a variety.
Polite conclusions
I shall be highly obliged to you.
I shall be greatly obliged to you.
I shall be grateful to you for this favour.
I would be highly grateful for your kind consideration.
I would be grateful if you could consider my request.
I shall remain grateful for your kind consideration.
Your kind consideration would be greatly appreciated.
I hope you will consider my request favourably.
I sincerely hope that you will grant my request.
I hope for a favourable response from you.
I look forward to your kind consideration.
I shall be thankful for your kind support and consideration.
Your favourable response would be a great help to me.
I hope you will understand my situation and grant my request.
6. “Thanking You” Alternatives
Instead of always:
Thanking you.
Students can use:
Thank you for your time and consideration.
I sincerely thank you for considering my request.
I would like to thank you for your kind consideration.
I shall be grateful for your kind consideration.
I sincerely appreciate your time and consideration.
I would greatly appreciate your support in this matter.
Thank you for your understanding and consideration.
I look forward to your favourable response.
Respectfully, I wish to bring to your notice that…
OR
I would like to draw your kind attention to…
↓
REASON
Due to…
Owing to…
As…
Because of…
In view of…
↓
REQUEST
I kindly request you to…
OR
I respectfully request you to…
OR
I would be grateful if you could…
OR
I seek your kind permission to…
↓
CONCLUSION
I shall be highly obliged to you.
OR
I would be grateful for your kind consideration.
OR
I hope you will consider my request favourably.
OR
I sincerely hope for a favourable response.

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